April 8, 2011
unravelings
A navel veil,
A grave Nile,
A vile vale unveils.
"Unravels
Unreal
Unnerving,"
Leaving gangs rave.
Engrave alive
A gun avails.
Evils lie,
Giving leave
Singing,
"Sang
Sung,
"Sang
Sung."
Level silver,
Leaving leas,
Salvia vessels revel
Grieving selves.
max brodsky (Denver, CO, 1989)
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1 comments:
a fun kind of word play... at first glance seems a bit simplistic, just word play, but I think that's the beauty of it... just underneath the play is a bit of social commentary just waiting for the brain to wrap around and play with far more than just in semantics
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